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Post by Narcissa on Mar 13, 2006 17:28:58 GMT -5
lol thats funny....my story (which ive written chapters of but they all have different characters in em so ive got a loooong way to go.....) is about this world the forgotten isles...its like the center of the worlds....its cool. and theres a huge power struggle going on and genocides and stuff (hmmm sound familiar...? history repeats itself, no matter what part of the universe youre in...)
anyways ill tell yall about it if you like (if not then thats fine too)
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Post by Narcissa on Mar 13, 2006 18:02:25 GMT -5
okay so (hahaha i have al the races and stuff mapped out... i even know how mixed race someone is by looking at them and i made maps of all the major towns and the isles....ahhaha im obsessed with my own writing...*sblack person*...sry i just find it funny im my first fangirl..lol...)
ok so theres a bunch of worlds. like earth. and other worlds. but since the universe/multiverse whatever is absofrigginlutely huge, it makes sense that theres shortcuts. like jumpgates. theyre claled portals. so obviously in this web of portals there has to be a center, somewhere thats connected to everything. that is the forgotten isles.
theres four races-- pyx, khie, nhaum, vel. pyx an khie are like elves. nhaum are like humans (in fact theyre humans just called something different cause they live on another world. youd be surprised at howe many worlds have humans on em.) vel are like....well, vel are seven feet tall with grey skin purple eyes and turquiose hair and nails. theyre "wild" i guess you could say. theyre pretty nomadic and live in tribes. very warlike. very very warlike. theyre cool. they live for an average of 200 years and are monotheistic--they worship their queen who lives 500 years (kinda like bees).
so anyways theres a power struggle between the khie and the pyx. the nhaum are really just like the merchant class of the races...they make loads of stuff, and the vel that come into the big towns are mostly half breeds so the vel are kinda doing their own thing. anyways, the pyx and the khie are like warring aristocrats cause they both want to unite the Isles under one rule but guess what, surpise surprise both races want to be in charge and within each race theres clans that want to be in charge and then individuals. its a rather large, involved power struggle.
meanwhile the vel have also decided to unite the Isles excpet their queen would rule and theyre trying to conquer the nhaum territory and the central isle (which is like neutral, everybody can live on it and its where most of the huge towns are) but even though theyre the best fighters they dont have much magic and their weapons are creally crude.
im not sure who wins yet, but theres tons of skirmishes and minor battles (nothing major yet at all, even with the vel tryin to take over....) and of disputes about portal control and stuff and some ppl are importing weapons from other worlds and stuff. i think its really interesting.
if you tell me what color eyes and hair you have (and if your ears are pointed or round) ill tell you what race or mixed race you are.
hehehe wow that was long...sry if it bored you...
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Post by Narcissa on Mar 13, 2006 20:49:16 GMT -5
see hybrids get their mothers eyes and fathers ears. i have round ears and only nhaum have round ears, so that means that somewhere in my paternal line there's nhaum blood. i have green eyes so i have a maternal line of khie, and my main element is also water cause your eye color determines your main element. therres sub elements and stuff but i wont get into that.
and lastly i would have some streak of pyx because pyx are blond....whichever parent is more powerful, you inherit their hair color...
i spent quite some time figuring this all out, btw. still not perfect and still changing, but whatevs.
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Post by Ana on Jun 29, 2006 4:54:30 GMT -5
ok, i have round ears and i think i have brown eyes. or maybe they're greenish-brown.
wow, it's taken me forever to read this thread. anyway, i've been planning for ages to write a fantasy book for kids or something of the sort but i'm taking my time thinking what it'll be about and everything. but it'l be fantasy! and when i start writing it i'll tell you about it. which will not be soon cuz i ahve so much to do it always takes me forever to get around to doing anything.
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Post by Narcissa on Jun 29, 2006 9:01:46 GMT -5
on the plane i also came up with a world on top of the clouds...
im figuring out how people could actually live on clouds and im going to ignore that until i fine-tune my explaination. ^__^ when in doubt, deny!
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Post by Narcissa on Jun 29, 2006 14:42:01 GMT -5
ana is the same as me...
and multi color eyes just means your dads mum was as strong as your mum magicwise so youd get some of her eye color.
power inheritance is totally unpredictable so...yeah. dont ask.
soooo...aqua, you have khie blood on your mums side cos of your green eyes, your paternal grandmother was pyx cos of the blue bits, and your mums side was a bit of pyx cos of your blond hair sooo....
were you to live on the isles, youd have, at simplest, a nhaum/pyx dad and a pyx/khie mum.
and its really just round ears v pointy ears....
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Post by Narcissa on Jun 29, 2006 14:53:12 GMT -5
ummm...
lots of mixies.
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Post by Narcissa on Jun 30, 2006 9:28:20 GMT -5
yeahhh prolly
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Post by Narcissa on Jun 30, 2006 13:02:32 GMT -5
on and off...right now im writing fanfiction...i have that hardest time making up characters. i can only write about someone if theyre based on a person i know.
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Post by Ana on Jul 3, 2006 4:48:20 GMT -5
yeah, i was once on a plane an also thought a world in the clouds story but failed to expand on it.
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