Post by Lilly Dragontongue-Skywalker on May 19, 2007 21:54:34 GMT -5
Well, I felt like writing song lyrics, but I was out of ideas. So I just started writing the first things that came to my head and I didn't care if they made sense, I only cared if they rhymed. I came out with some stuff about a grocery store. I figured it wouldn't make any sense...it makes more sense than I first thought.
Please comment on these song lyrics, but realize that they are...for the most part...just random junk.
UNTITLED SONG
I took a trip right down the aisle
Right down through the old turn stile.
I hope to find the meaning to
The crazy life I thought I knew.
I feel lost and I’ve paid the cost
At this old grocery store.
I tried to break the same mistake
But I can’t find the aisle I’m looking for.
There once was a boy, he looked at me
He told me what I wanted to be.
My life’s left on that conveyor belt,
He packed my bags and no one knew how I felt.
I took a trip down the corner aisle,
To where I found the recycling pile.
I hope I find the lyrics to
The simple song I thought I knew.
I feel down as I look around
This place that I once knew.
I tried to find what I left behind
I all I see is you.
There once was a boy, he looked at me
He told me what I wanted to be.
My life’s left on that conveyor belt,
He packed my bags and no one knew how I felt.
Take the time to answer all the questions,
Fill them out the best that you can.
Write them in the space, and don’t erase,
Let initial feelings land.
There once was a boy, he looked at me
He told me what I wanted to be.
My life’s left on that conveyor belt,
He packed my bags and no one knew I felt.
If anyone can tell me make up what "I tried to break the same mistake" means...lol!!
Please comment on these song lyrics, but realize that they are...for the most part...just random junk.
UNTITLED SONG
I took a trip right down the aisle
Right down through the old turn stile.
I hope to find the meaning to
The crazy life I thought I knew.
I feel lost and I’ve paid the cost
At this old grocery store.
I tried to break the same mistake
But I can’t find the aisle I’m looking for.
There once was a boy, he looked at me
He told me what I wanted to be.
My life’s left on that conveyor belt,
He packed my bags and no one knew how I felt.
I took a trip down the corner aisle,
To where I found the recycling pile.
I hope I find the lyrics to
The simple song I thought I knew.
I feel down as I look around
This place that I once knew.
I tried to find what I left behind
I all I see is you.
There once was a boy, he looked at me
He told me what I wanted to be.
My life’s left on that conveyor belt,
He packed my bags and no one knew how I felt.
Take the time to answer all the questions,
Fill them out the best that you can.
Write them in the space, and don’t erase,
Let initial feelings land.
There once was a boy, he looked at me
He told me what I wanted to be.
My life’s left on that conveyor belt,
He packed my bags and no one knew I felt.
If anyone can tell me make up what "I tried to break the same mistake" means...lol!!
