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Post by death... you need a life on May 30, 2007 14:21:23 GMT -5
Okay, I'm listening to Ana and starting my own thread. I haven't done much for a while and what I have done, I've been forgetting to post. I'll add the rest later but I only have two with me right now.
Until Again
I'm so very proud of you You just don't know I got a chance to say good-bye Before I watch you go It'll be tough for a little while But soon enough I'll be okay And I feel so very sure You and I will meet again someday It may not be tomorrow Not even the day after that But we will see each other again That I know for a fact I'll miss your smiling face And your shining blue eyes But just until "again" This is our teary good-bye
*written a couple weeks ago after i watched Andrew get his high school diploma and give him a hug for probably the last time.
"Freedom"
The school bell rings And students scream out Summer is finally here Definately, for sure, without a doubt A time to stay up all night And sleep until your parents get home No reason to study for class Or increase the size of your dome School's out and you're free From teachers and tests From rules and restrictions And from classmates you call pests But the fun will come to an end You'll have to head back to class A couple months of freedom But only if you pass
*written the same night and i believe very crappy
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Post by death... you need a life on Jun 21, 2007 16:57:54 GMT -5
Thanks, Samantha. Yeah, I didn't really like the second one either. I was just bored. And there was nothing on tv, I have nothing to read, no one to talk to and I wasn't tired so I started writing some crappy poems. LOL
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Post by death... you need a life on Jun 22, 2007 17:25:36 GMT -5
Okay, I brought a bunch of my poems with me today. I don't know how many of them I've already posted but here are the ones I don't think I have yet.
JOKING
Why do you joke the way you do? Don't you know I want you too? My heart breaks a little more Knowing I can't have you for sure Everytime I look into your eyes My soul screams louder, it's ill-fated cries Pushing you away and ignoring your calls That was a mistake, I know, but everyone falls I should have realized my mistakes before Now it just makes me want you more Why do you joke the way you do? Can't you see I want you, too?
HER SAVIOR
He was her first love and her savior He was the first one to mean everything to her She would have given up so long ago But he taught her what she was meant to know He always promised he'd be by her side All the way to the day they both died She wanted to believe his every word But felt he's found to fly away like a bird He never once thought about leaving And she was able to go on believing The he truly meant what he said Until the day the were both dead.
(I have to get home but I'll post the rest next time I come. It may take a few post to get them all up, because there are quite a few.)
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Post by death... you need a life on Jun 26, 2007 16:45:42 GMT -5
Accomplishment
The day I said "I love you" I wasn't expecting to hear it back I was just trying to sort our my life And divide what I have from what I truly lack I didn't mean to ruin you life The way you ruined mine If you had told me the truth I'd have been just fine Now I will never be the same My life was turned inside out Now I don't even smile I just sit around and pout I have you to thank for that Are you proud of you accomplishment? Now I have you to blame As I scream your name whenever I vent!
*I don't really like this one, I was just angry and really bored.
Christmas Wish
I dream of the day That I can fly away So I can be with you My love tried and true I've been running for years Always away from the tears With you at my side I will no longer hide You bring out the best in me You show me who I want to be My wish finally came true All I want for Christmas... is you
Apologies
We just sat and talked tonight Like we've done in the past But tonight was a bit different You apologized for mistakes passed We shared our own thoughts On your mistakes and mine I learned wht I really felt Whenever I said "It's fine" You said you were sorry For not stopping me when I fell I said I was sorry too For not telling what I really had to tell My biggest regret is waiting So long to tell you why I cry And my biggest fear is that You'll leave without saying goodbye
Deepest Vow
He promised to be there for me But that was a promise easily dismissed He knew our love would never be Even so, he will always be missed All I want is for him to be happy If he is happy, I will hurt alone Even is this makes me get sappy And it will hurt even when he is gone As the darkness hides the tears That are cried for his sake And I try to run from the fears That with his help, were kept at bay I vow to keep my dreams alive Because now I know I can survive
His Seventeenth Year
Jamie and Landon, when together, were a very strange couple until the day Landon found out that Jamie was in trouble. There wasn't much he could do, and because of cancer she was dying. He wanted her to know when he said "I love you," he wasn't lying. By asking her to marry him, he made her wish come true. They didn't have long together, but he knew it would have to do. With every bit of faith that she had had before, she went and made her way straight to Heaven's door. Landon vowed, in front of God and everybody that he'd love her always. As he looks back on that year, he knows he will stay true to his word to the end of his days.
*About A Walk to Remember, during my AWtR phase
LAST ONE!!!!! For now anyway.
Hypnotized
I've lived all these years Without any fears And was hypnotized By your many lies Now that you've gone your way There is nothing I need to say I know none of it was real I am the one who can feel I will not waste my time Or sit around and whine I'll leave you memory behind So I can soul-search to find I'm putting you out of my life As the saying goes, out of sight, out of mind
*That's all I have for now. Maybe I will find time and inspiration to write some more. I'm in the middle of a song right now. I have the first verse and the chorus with part of the second verse. But I can't figure out where to go from there. A friend is supposed to help me but if she waits too long, I'll post what I have on this thread to ask for help.
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Post by death... you need a life on Jul 5, 2007 17:44:16 GMT -5
This is what I have so far of the song I'm writing. It's not very good but it's better than some of the other songs I've tried to write.
Can't Wait (Voice in the Wind)
Verse 1: What's going on? How did I get here? What happened to you being there? You promised me, time and again. But you knew that we couldn't be together forever. Life isn't a fairy tale. We don't get three wishes. But we won't always fail.
Chorus: *Don't make a promise if you can't keep it. I should have known the pieces wouldn't fir.* I can't wait forever. We won't be together. Do you love me? One day, I'll see. Your lies are fading. Cause I've stopped waiting. In the end, there's no voice in the wind.
Verse 2: Looking back on what I've done. I miss the times when we had fun. Losing you was difficult. But I don't want to sound pitiful. Oh, no!
What is in * I'm thinking about taking out. And I don't know where to go after the "Oh, no!" in the second verse. Any suggestions?
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