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Post by Ana on Dec 21, 2005 12:44:49 GMT -5
this is my fanfic, and it's terrible, so id on't care what you say about it but still, you can give some suggestions.
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Post by Narcissa on Dec 22, 2005 11:31:14 GMT -5
v good for reading. i like that it doesnt stick to the book the whole time! please write more when you can!
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Post by Ana on Dec 23, 2005 0:17:33 GMT -5
lol, you tghink it's good? would you like to co write to continue it? i have no idea what to write later on.
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Post by Narcissa on Dec 23, 2005 13:28:02 GMT -5
thanks but no thanks....i usually screw stuff up when i co-write it...but if you need ideas im happy to help! but the easiest thing to do if youre stuck is just typing totally random stuff for the charcters to say, even if it's just like "MEH" cause you might be able to go somewhere with it. (at least, this works for me, since most of my stories are insanely random anyway...)
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Post by Ana on Dec 29, 2005 20:09:20 GMT -5
it sounds like roleplay, because that's what you do in roleplay, but it all works out there so i guess it will here! i'll try. i kinda forgot what happened there, i read it a million years ago.
p.s. like my siggy? i typed it from memory!
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Post by Narcissa on Dec 29, 2005 20:42:30 GMT -5
word perfect except its on the 2nd to last line its "one ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them"
but other than that YAY! *checks book* yep yep you got it except fot the capitals they stick in all over the place. ^__^ go you!!!!
chatty....sorry...ill stop now. (or is it ok to chat on these things...?)
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Post by Ana on Dec 31, 2005 12:46:03 GMT -5
ok it's ok with the chatty, yeah i remembered the second to last line but forgot to fix it, and capitals annoy me so screw them. ok, no more chatting and i'll write a second chapter.
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Post by none on Jan 3, 2006 12:47:48 GMT -5
I read this a while ago. I liked it. ^_^
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