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Post by death... you need a life on Feb 19, 2006 17:28:10 GMT -5
Please, someone, anyone make my pain go away what could i have done to make my life go astray
(anyone here from dracomalfoy lately?)
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Post by none on Feb 20, 2006 11:38:41 GMT -5
(nope, nope. I dunno what's up. Maybe she's busy?)
I thought we had something the way he used to hold me but then our relationship started jumping bruised arms, why can't I be free?
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Post by Narcissa on Feb 20, 2006 17:56:21 GMT -5
(srry i was in chicago for four days without internet..*twitch**twitch*)
did all this fall apart because of me? Is the blame for failing mine alone? Was I the one who broke this or was he? Do I take the blame all on my own?
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Post by death... you need a life on Feb 20, 2006 18:04:14 GMT -5
Is there any real reason? Did I do something to upset him? Is it the changing season? Or is his love wearing thin?
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Post by none on Feb 20, 2006 18:45:53 GMT -5
maybe he loves someone more or maybe he thinks we're growing apart i never wanted to see him walk out that door he doesn't even realize he broke my heart
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Post by Narcissa on Feb 20, 2006 18:54:55 GMT -5
All I hear's "forget, move on- He's not good enough for you" But he still has the heart he won From me and ........................
(someone finish that line for me, i cant think of anything...)
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Post by none on Feb 20, 2006 18:58:41 GMT -5
from me and someone I could sue
for stealing my only love from me and i have never met her but is she in the same condition as me? does she not know about me, for sure?
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Post by death... you need a life on Feb 20, 2006 21:50:23 GMT -5
The only advice I get is "Forget him, move on" He's the one in the wrong biz but never again will i have won
I need him now more than ever But he doesnt even care about me I shouldn't have begun this endeavor Now I am devastated, not free
(sorry I added a second stanza it just came out)
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Post by none on Feb 21, 2006 11:38:55 GMT -5
(lol 'tis ok!)
How could I have fallen for his lies? His cheating and abuse I should have known when I had my cries cuz he wasn't there, he had fun and let loose
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Post by Narcissa on Feb 21, 2006 16:57:02 GMT -5
................i got nothin....my muse and i are having a slight tizz........
also, does anyone else feel that this roundrobin poem is really really depressing...? (just stating my opinion...not saying stop writing or anything.....)
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Post by none on Feb 21, 2006 18:09:34 GMT -5
lol, no i don't think it's depressing. lol i don't normally think love is a bad thing...i wanted to write something i never did before, so i started on a bad relationship. we can end this one, and you can start a happier one if you'd like.
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Post by Narcissa on Feb 21, 2006 18:12:06 GMT -5
fanks much.....
dyou mind bethany...?
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Post by death... you need a life on Feb 21, 2006 18:32:36 GMT -5
oh no i dont mind but ive got a question for you two now. if i pot that all three of us wrote this together, do you guys mid if i post it on my poetry page? id really like to hear what others have to say about it.
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Post by Narcissa on Feb 21, 2006 18:33:11 GMT -5
sure, go ahead ^__^ its fine w me!
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Post by death... you need a life on Feb 21, 2006 18:39:43 GMT -5
samantha? you mind?
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