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Post by Lilly Dragontongue-Skywalker on Feb 4, 2006 21:19:12 GMT -5
I really like it. It would make a good song.
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Post by none on Feb 4, 2006 21:21:42 GMT -5
Thankies! *huggles*
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Post by Narcissa on Feb 5, 2006 10:04:19 GMT -5
twas fabulous!!!!!
you know, when i was little i used to wonder why all the songs had to be about love...now i wonder if theres any other inspiration.....
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Post by Narcissa on Feb 5, 2006 10:31:13 GMT -5
anyone know good rhymes for "glass" or "doubt" ??
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Post by death... you need a life on Feb 5, 2006 12:05:53 GMT -5
that was really good aqua.
im kinda the same way. you never really hear any songs that are about something other than love anymore. and i cant think of any rhymes for those. but maye without for doubt or something like that.
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Post by none on Feb 5, 2006 12:40:37 GMT -5
thankies dracomalfoy and bethany! *hug*
glass- class, mass, pass, doubt- trout, pout,
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Post by Lilly Dragontongue-Skywalker on Feb 5, 2006 13:34:28 GMT -5
Need rhymes (for anything)? Go to www.rhymezone.com. It's a really good online rhyming dictonary. Put in your word, press go get it!, and it will give you tons of rhymes. What's also cool, is that it's sorted by syllabols, so you can find the right number of syllabols as you need to fit your song/poem. Looking at "glass" one syllabol rhymes are: bass, class, gas, pass (just to name a very few). Two syllabol rhymes include: air mass, alas, amass, depass, harass, impasse, or repass. There are tons of words, up to EIGHT syllabol rhymes which are: law of conservation of mass, liquefied petroleum gas, and relative molecular mass. Wow!!! It's a good site. You should check it out.
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Post by none on Feb 5, 2006 13:45:48 GMT -5
^wow thanks!
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Post by death... you need a life on Feb 5, 2006 15:18:00 GMT -5
thats a pretty cool site. i wish i had known about it sooner. ill check it our next time i need a good rhyme
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Post by Narcissa on Feb 5, 2006 17:09:28 GMT -5
sweet!!!!! i ended up rhyming "glass" with "lass" and replacing "doubt" with "muse" to rhyme with "lose".......thanks though!!!!! *searches for rhyme for "south"*
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Post by death... you need a life on Feb 5, 2006 17:38:01 GMT -5
make sure you post it when youre done. i want to read it.
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Post by Narcissa on Feb 5, 2006 18:06:46 GMT -5
ok.....i finished but some of its kinda embarrassing so ill leave it out cause i want to change it later if i can....
right i hated it so now its gone. i like this one better...i wrote it ages and ages ago and im not with the person anymore...
You're my reason for living Your soul is my song Your heartbeat's my rythm I've loved you so long
You know that I need you Why won't you reply? I beg; end this silence ...............just not with "goodbye"...... ah well it was for the best we stopped talkin to each other (well i tried but they didnt) and we didnt go to school together so we just sort of ended it. bleh i sound so pathetic!!! >_< but everything worked out i guess
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Post by lucius on Feb 5, 2006 18:11:23 GMT -5
im not a fan of love poems myself but thats awsum, u should take it up proffesionally lol what are the two lines? x
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Post by Narcissa on Feb 5, 2006 18:13:49 GMT -5
thnx...i dunno why but ive been writing love poems a lot this weekend.... youve got 3 guesses why and the first two dont count xxx just one of those things i guess....anyway i think that one is bad..if i come up with something better then im just deleting that one...i like my second one best. which one do you like...? gahhh my love poems are usually really awful...the first two sonnets were great and then there was this one...*burns third sonnet* my muse appears to have a fine time toying with me.....from my writing i cant tell if my muse loves me and has a short attention span or if my muse hates my guts..... *shrug* it turns out the same.& you cant see it either cuz its awful...
and the hated poem is deleted and replaced with a kinda pathetic but otherwise ok poem
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Post by death... you need a life on Feb 5, 2006 21:56:10 GMT -5
that was actually pretty good. i was talking with a friend a lil while ago and she was sharing some of her poems with me. they were really good. i wish mine were as good as hers. *sigh* oh well. live and learn
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