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Post by none on Feb 9, 2006 18:12:06 GMT -5
hm. coolies. i also created a xanga where i'm putting my poems www.xanga.com/Unmistakablelovebut it was last updated dec. 31st or something, and it has only my old bad poems.
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Post by death... you need a life on Feb 9, 2006 20:56:28 GMT -5
Well I wrote a new one in seventh period today because I was really bored. It needs a bit of revision but its okay.
Heartbreak Draws Near
When this time of year Begins to draw near My heart always shatters And life doesn't matter Because I know I'll be alone I'll have no one to hold Someday, I'll be whole again Someday, but who knows when Today is not that day But, one day, I say I'll find someone to love My angel from above As for right now I'll survive somehow That is why my heart Every year falls apart And why every year I fear When Valentine's draws near
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Post by Narcissa on Feb 9, 2006 22:50:45 GMT -5
nice ^_^ fabby portrayal of valentines day.....i finished fixin my poem!! ^__^ its actually ok now...
My lover lives behind the mirror; I Wish I could hold him even for a while And tell him that I want him. Why Can I not hear his voice or see him smile? I know that mirror magic captures souls But this one glass has charmed and caught my heart I, restless, lovesick, write poems--shore or shoals? Or both, or neither? Finish or the start? My lover waves behind the silver glass He sometimes is so carefree that I muse If he’s as pained by distance as his lass But silent words still mark him mine to lose. I long to have Adonis mine at last; The arrows of young Eros are stuck fast
much better.....
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Post by death... you need a life on Feb 10, 2006 11:24:29 GMT -5
that is really good. and thanx. i was really bored in seventh period and very depressed. so yea.
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Post by none on Feb 10, 2006 13:28:19 GMT -5
wowwiez wow! very good!
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Post by Narcissa on Feb 10, 2006 16:11:41 GMT -5
whose?
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Post by none on Feb 10, 2006 17:20:32 GMT -5
both!!!!!
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Post by death... you need a life on Feb 10, 2006 17:43:34 GMT -5
thanks. i felt like writing something about valentine's day. lol and my poem Behind My Eyes, someone wants to publish it in a book full of poetry.
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Post by none on Feb 10, 2006 18:18:21 GMT -5
oh wow! how coolies!
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Post by Narcissa on Feb 11, 2006 13:15:09 GMT -5
yes dudette that is most excellent!!!!! *envies* the most my poems got in was a school thing.....on the other hand i never submitted any.....*shruggy*
valentines day is coming.....can anyone give me a topic to write about besides love...? its depressing being single and writing love poems near valentines day >__< but i cant think of anything else.
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Post by none on Feb 11, 2006 13:33:50 GMT -5
write something about war? nature? the universe? the unknown? happiness? unfairness? reality?
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Post by Narcissa on Feb 11, 2006 13:36:58 GMT -5
oooooohhhh.....nice.......thnx much chickie.....
*write* *write* *write* hah i have the first stanza of a war poem....sry its not so good but whatevs....
Pounding bloodlust in the soldier’s veins He hears the drumming of his cohort’s feet Even vultures screaming overhead Give chords to amp the hungry war-drum beat
you knwo what? we should have a roundrobin poetry thing. not necessarily that one but like someone starts a poem and writes a bit then someone continues and so on...might be fun...
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Post by none on Feb 12, 2006 14:02:29 GMT -5
^yeah it might! that's a good idea!
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Post by Narcissa on Feb 12, 2006 15:16:53 GMT -5
ok. would you like to start?
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Post by death... you need a life on Feb 13, 2006 11:54:12 GMT -5
that does sound like a good idea but i dont know how much help ill be. i cant write on the spot. i have to sit and think on it a while.
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